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Dear Brain
Again I would like to thank you for your help with the rewrites. I agree the new opening is so much better and far more dramatic.
However, do you REALLY need to suggest such things at 1 in the morning?
Again I would like to thank you for your help with the rewrites. I agree the new opening is so much better and far more dramatic.
However, do you REALLY need to suggest such things at 1 in the morning?
Just be grateful that by morning Dear Brain hadn’t decided you didn’t want it and thrown all of it away except for the clear recollection that it was brilliant.